Annual Selection 2010
Judge's Comments: 'Haiku in season'
Selections and comments by Isamu Hashimoto
In making the annual selections for 2010, I first selected honorable mentions and other entries above this level. I then grouped the entries by author in the order of their first appearances in the daily "Haiku in English" column. Thirdly, I selected the third, second and first prizes, each of which I decided to award to more than one haiku, and listed the month of original publication. Below the names of the authors, I added brief haiku comments. I hope these will shed a ray of light on my final choices, and I hope readers will forgive my assumptions.
Bruce Ross (Bangor, ME, USA)
This author's way of seeing things is a bit different from us ordinary haijin, but he surely and precisely grasps "suchness." I am very happy to know that through his works, this haiku master is still ready and willing.
sand waves up to and over
the stone islands
(January, 2010)
more prominent now
...end of autumn
(3rd prize: November, 2010)
sea fans brighten, darken
with the current
(July, 2010)
Jose del Valle (Rockville, RI, USA)
I foresee this author winning the top prize in the future. I would be very glad if he could criticize his own pieces more severely before submitting them. Taking all into consideration, I awarded him a second prize.
in both ears
cicadas
(January, 2010)
or Heifetz
summer night
(August, 2010)
since I wandered in moonlight
a little drunk
(October, 2010)
a happy new year
wrong number
(February, 2010)
breaks the silence
hairy moon
(2nd prize: September, 2010)
Ralf Broeker (Ochtrup, Germany)
The haiku below conjures up such fascinating and beautiful scenery, switching the misty environment from a sense of hearing to one of sight in a flash. This is a kind of synesthetic method.
the sound of a fast car
becomes light
(3rd prize: January, 2010)
Jacek Margolak (Kierce, Poland)
This author senses many kinds of beauty, putting them easily into haiku form.
from my roof
--winter moon
(January, 2010)
her butterfly hair slide
flutters
(July, 2010)
my reflection on the ice
--snowflakes
(3rd prize: February, 2010)
Gregory Hopkins (Weaver, AL, USA)
"Autumn moon": The author realized amidst the autumn moonlight that he finally came back to haiku after having taken such a roundabout course. In the words of Basho: "Haiku is the art and enjoyment of old people."
the creator
of the billboard
(January, 2010)
more trees
than breeze
(August, 2010)
why I return
to poetry
(2nd prize: November, 2010)
another world
on the world
(June 2010)
suddenly the sunset
branches
(October, 2010)
Anabela Anca Mendes (Durham, NC, USA)
One of the new fireplace findings.
burns anew inside
starry night
(January, 2010)
William Cullen Jr (Brooklyn, NY, USA)
This author was surely standing still facing toward the horizon. Suddenly the moon appeared and strongly pulled him over toward her. This could be a foretaste of monster earthquakes.
the flash of a sunfish
deep in the pond
(January, 2010)
I feel the strong pull
of the undertow
(2nd prize: March, 2010)
john martone (Charleston, IL, USA)
Mr. Martone remembered the same point in the middle of the frozen lake. He felt good about the way the stars dotted themselves there.
the same space
between stars
(3rd prize: January, 2010)
& little buddha too
glows in the dark
(June 2010)
here's my lost
sweater button
(March, 2010)
Helga Stania (Greppen, Switzerland)
Two good honorable mentions.
from alpine pastures
expanding silence
(January, 2010)
just a hint
butterflies
(September, 2010)
Heike Gewi (Aden-Crater, Yemen)
'Door curtain': If this author happens to have an English or Japanese version of the novel, I would like to read it.
pushes the moon higher
howling
(January, 2010)
body-painful
palm trees bloom
(June 2010)
score the sky:
new year's morning
(February, 2010)
I put a ghost
in my novel.
(November, 2010)
charlie smith (Raleigh, NC, USA)
I like the second line of the following haiku because six "s" sounds are effective for this big mysterious river.
slow silent Mississippi
in my daydream
(January, 2010)
Tatsuya Onai (Matsudo, Chiba, Japan)
Absurdity occurs in this haiku, but at the same time, it's real, indeed.
sounds more loudly
far ahead
(January, 2010)
Ferre Denis (Antwerp, Belgium)
"Merely" in this haiku is not "merely," as the author intends.
in my winter garden
merely
(February, 2010)
Gesine Becker (Stralsund, Germany)
The author might have seen the monster tsunami more than one year before.
the sound of sea
deep frozen
(February, 2010)
john mcdonald (Edinburgh, Scotland)
"Swan": This is the most appropriate choice for the third line. "Forming" won this author a second prize.
covered with snow:
zen garden
(February, 2010)
polished floor
passing clouds
(July, 2010)
dips
reddens the water
(April, 2010)
a swan
forming
(2nd prize: September, 2010)
Grzegorz Sionkowski (Torun, Poland)
Sensing the changes of the seasons ...
breathing in the scent
of campfire smoke
(February, 2010)
Claudia Melchior (Freiburg, Germany)
Two 2nd prizes were given for this author's uncommon haiku talent.
to slow down the globe
with one finger
(2nd prize: February, 2010)
The Girl from Ipanema
through the town
(2nd prize: September, 2010)
fereshteh panahi (Mashad, Iran)
"Walker" in the following haiku represents an amiable relationship between the old and the young. Using "orange" in the second haiku, the author dreams of having a magnificent, solid stone house, but in real terms ...
is next to the granddaughter's scooter
after a breathtaking race
(February, 2010)
this time
the orange brick house
(3rd prize: October, 2010)
Helen Buckingham (Bristol, UK)
Overall, Helen-san wins a No. 1 placing. "Tea" teaches us how we are going to lead happy lives despite many unfortunate happenings.
pocketing
the moment
(February, 2010)
top up their tans
coffee in hand
(October, 2010)
still skies
over Britain
(June, 2010)
but oh...
that sweet cup of tea
(1st prize: December, 2010)
Keith A. Simmonds (Tunapuna, Trinidad & Tobago)
Overall Mr. Simmonds wins a No. 2 placing. The same remarks I gave to Mr. Jose del Valle apply to him.
around the chimney:
winter moon
(February, 2010)
in the morning sunshine...
market place
(2nd prize: August, 2010)
up and down the night...
thickening fog
(April, 2010)
skipping across my car...
Paris by night
(October, 2010)
Mamoru Ikeda (Ube, Japan)
The author's "dandelion" here is a good example of the zoom-out method.
inches thicker
snow's falling
(February, 2010)
dandelion seeds
a jetliner zooms off
(July, 2010)
Marshall Hryciuk (Toronto, ON, Canada)
A kind of discovery, but not entirely a new finding:
of pampas grass
one side only
(March, 2010)
Mario Massimo Zontini (Parma, Italy)
Another possibility for the following haiku could be: "whiter than / the winter moonlight-- / a barn owl."
in the winter moonlight--
a barn owl
(March, 2010)
Megan Elizabeth Monish (NE Hickory, NC, USA)
OK, stay there. I envy you for your life of happy solitude.
a down comforter
and nowhere to go
(March, 2010)
A. Thiagarajan (Mumbai, India)
Judging from the haiku here, the author must be a hotel owner's friend. They were probably enjoying talking by the red flaming stove in the lobby, waiting for guests to arrive.
she lights the stove
at every slowing car
(March, 2010)
ed markowski (Auburn Hills, MI, USA)
Here lies a 'haikuic' acknowledgement -- namely, the author caught a glimpse of life in a beam of the moon.
in a split second
my moonlit biography
(3rd prize: March, 2010)
Ramona Linke (Beesenstedt, Germany)
"Flickering": The juxtaposition of "thunderstorm" and "young mare" is excellent, indeed. I can clearly see the scene. "Young mare" got the prize.
granny reads out fairy tales
with her witch voice
(March, 2010)
flickering in the eyes
of the young mare
(2nd prize: September, 2010)
I open the smile
of my grandchild
(December, 2010)
above the ship mill
the Milky Way
(August, 2010)
between two stars
as wide as a finger
(November, 2010)
Karol Rosiak (Bydgoszcz, Poland)
Standing among the old garden trees, the author suddenly becomes aware of the years she has passed.
from tree to tree
my childhood
(April, 2010)
David Durston (Gwynneville, Australia)
Water has stopped gushing from a dragon-shaped fountain. Mr. Durston developed a fantasy and wrote that the monster was sunning itself under a street light.
sunning itself at night
under a street lamp
(3rd prize: April, 2010)
Patricia Neubauer (Philadelphia, PA, USA)
I think this author's haiku has been getting more and more sensitive and mature.
her smock the same color
as the daffodils
(April, 2010)
sailboats race the storm
to harbor
(October, 2010)
tonight's twilight becomes
tomorrow's dawn
(Aug. 11, 2010)
Michael McClintock (Clovis, CA, USA)
Mr. McClintock, I'll never forget your excellent series of haiku concerning the Vietnam War. Especially, this:
tonight...wishing / the lightning were lightning / the thunder, thunder (MM)
as far as the eye can see
wildflowers blowing
(3rd prize: May 2010)
hortensia anderson (New York, NY, USA)
In the Japanese seasonal almanac, we classify "tsubaki" (camellia) as a spring flower, and the waterlily is included in the summer category. In America, however, authors are free to choose words independently from Japanese haiku standards or adopt two seasonal words in one haiku.
light falls in the folds
of the camellia
(May 2010)
of a waterlily...
spring moon
(July, 2010)
K. Ramesh (Chennai, India)
Indeed. I've felt the following way too when my bag is not stuffed with things:
the shoulder bag
so light
(May 2010)
a salamander rests
under the bookshelf
(December, 2010)
Stephen A. Peters (Bellingham, WA, USA)
"Summer breeze": I acknowledge the author's haiku talent in the third line.
walking around the tree
for a better view
(May 2010)
in the candy store
summer breeze
(3rd prize: October, 2010)
Hubertus Thum (Hammamet, Tunisia)
The big bang is said to have occurred more than 100 million years ago. Today, we see cherry buds' beautiful big bang.
of cherry buds
the universe's long memory
(May 2010)
all these forgotten
faces
(June, 2010)
Lothar M. Kirsch (Meerbusch, Germany)
"Strange": The author is looking up at the clear night sky, seeing innumerable stars. One step aside, he can see a different aspect of the universe.
Only steps away
Another galaxy
(3rd prize; June 2010)
Curled leaves
Like hurrying mice
(November, 2010)
Michelle Ang (Kyoto, Japan)
"Weather": A good report, thanks. Interesting.
Between the lines
That aren't there
(May 2010)
Sunny over the pool with gusts of
Small screaming children
(September, 2011)
Angelee Deodhar (Chandigarh, India)
Why don't you join in the cyclists and get a fresh feeling like this haiku has.
cyclists lean into
mountain mist
(3rd prize: May 2010)
Shaahrokh Solhjoo (Esfahan, Iran)
A haiku reminding us where beauty can be found. Let's raise a relief fund so that the planet and people in poverty can find this kind of happiness.
Her hands
A gorgeous girl
(May 2010)
Urszula Wielanowska (Kielce, Poland)
"Chemotherapy": Buddha sitting, Christ on the cross, Muhammad hearing … We believe someone watches over the patient building the final house of cards.
I'm building
the last house of card
(3rd prize: June 2010)
in the monastic window
I'm not alone
(September, 2010)
only shadows
walking
(August, 2010)
breeze
sculpts my features
(October, 2010)
Robert Epstein (El Cerrito, CA, USA)
We can easily imagine a good loving relationship between man and woman.
the way she starts
each day
(3rd prize: June, 2010)
Amin Pedziwiater (Rzeszow, Poland)
I want to know the words the author said to the highland lass.
red
on her face
(June, 2010)
Krzysztof Kokot (Nowy Targ, Poland)
Sorry, I was a little bit late, but just in time for the musical performance.
just one seat
still free
(June 2010)
Wolfgang Beutke (Barum, Germany)
There's a flavor of romance mixed with adventure in this haiku.
the pilot's low voice cutting
through silence
(June 2010)
Francis Attard (Marsa, Malta)
"Unmade": Gradually the outline of a heron emerges from the moonlit marsh. Beautiful.
in moonlit waters
less whiteness
(3rd prize: June, 2010)
a shadow in the night
the white heron
(October, 2010)
J. D. Heskin (Duluth, MN, USA)
"Heskenn": The selector's name, Hashimoto, is made from two Chinese characters: "Hashi" means bridge; "moto" book -- "bridge book?" Anyway, I like it, as Mr. Heskin does his.
'heskenn,' which means
where rushes grow
(June 2010)
leaving no shadow
is not a haiku
(December, 2010)
a place where few words
are said
(November, 2010)
Mark Miller (Shoalhaven Heads, Australia)
The autumn rain isn't so romantic if the author is going to the hospital to see his friend.
at the hospital gates
autumn rain
(June 2010)
Vasil Moldovan (Bucharest, Romania)
The sound of the vuvuzelas is still reverberating in my ears.
above the Southern Africa--
the Football World Cup
(July, 2010)
Don Hansbrough (Seattle, WA, USA)
It is the California sun leaving for India. The author loves the silky pink California sun very much. Why India, I do not know.
in pink spring silk
leaving for India
(July, 2010)
Origa (Okemos, MI, USA)
Origa-san standing on the tundra ... Her purpose in being out in the gnat-filled air seems so vast and mysterious.
a voice of a bell pierces
the gnat-filled air
(August, 2010)
Sheila K. Barksdale (Gainesville, FL, USA)
I once saw two women on opposite sides of a New York subway car reading the very same Danielle Steel book. "Don't let a haiku moment pass by without recording it" is the rule, and the author sticks to it.
her designer jacket has
strange dramatic swirls
(August, 2010)
the call of the loon
from a stuffed toy
(October, 2010)
Heike Stehr (Moers, Germany)
The author is making a call and at the same time looking over at the dandelions, half his mind floating away on the fluff.
he dials her number
and keeps silent
(August, 2010)
Tyrone McDonald (Brooklyn, NY, USA)
Mr. McDonald stands firmly on the 2nd prize podium. All three pieces collected here are of a very high level.
grasping the light
and the darkness
(August, 2010)
a branch is its first target
these crooked things
(November, 2010)
my fears
are more picturesque
(2nd prize: October, 2010)
Rudi Pfaller (Remshalden, Germany)
I've never had the chance to see a brimstone butterfly flitting up in the air, but the line "the sun gets wings" is captivating and beautiful.
the sun
gets wings
(3rd prize: May 2010)
making efforts to walk
tall
(August, 2010)
Bernhard Kopf (Vienna, Austria)
This refers indirectly to human affairs.
The air conditioning stopped
Summer evening
(August, 2010)
A. Sethuramiah (Bangalore, India)
The punchy third line is luring us to the street in the mountain resort.
clouds engulf me
on the street
(August, 2010)
jerry ball (Walnut Creek, CA, USA)
"Smiles": Jerry-san enables us to look down into the deep abyss of the human mind.
It's a real problem
being that pretty...
(2nd prize: September, 2010)
the fallen pine cone
rolls to a stop
(November, 2010)
Reza Aerabi (Semnan, Iran)
So charming, a child scarecrow. The full moon is casting a smile on him.
child-scarecrow
guarding the beans
(October, 2010)
Janice Tay (Kyoto, Japan)
The lady cashier is welcoming this newly arrived foreigner, waving an "uchiwa" and wiping her face with a "tenugui."
a supermarket cashier
waits for customers
(September, 2010)
David Boyer (Stamford, CT, USA)
There were so many crazy hot days in 2010. And on March 11, 2011, the craziest tsunami attacked Japan.
which way the table wobbles
the heat
(3rd prize: September, 2010)
Beate Conrad (Waterford, MI, USA)
A fantastic butterfly unfolding another universe in a moment.
another universe
unfolding
(2nd prize: September, 2010)
darkness gently dividing
man from man.
(December, 2010)
druart patrick (Urou et Crennes, France)
Mr. Patrick, you should refrain from drinking too much. I know you are a man of great character whom everybody likes.
Helping my drunk shadow
to find its key
(3rd prize: September, 2010)
John Hamley (Marmora, ON, Canada)
We have another "the moon in a bucket" piece here. However the first line is good and well-supplemented.
the moon
in a bucket
(September, 2010)
A moth
flew out
(December, 2010)
Raquel D. Bailey (Falls Church, VA, USA)
The last word, "sinks," suggests the author is leading a very quiet life.
our last
crimson flame...sinks
(3rd prize: October, 2010)
Ralph J. Moritz (Chesterfield, MO, USA)
The author hits a home run here in his first at-bat. Bravo! Mr. Moritz, every evening you beat a drum and sing as the amazing Montana sun is setting... I imagine there could be no happier life than this.
What else can an old fool do
as summer's sun sets.
(1st prize: October, 2010)
P K Padhy (Rajahmundry, India)
Father, I still wonder.
the child wonders
the rest
(November, 2010)
McMurtagh (San Diego, CA, USA)
I would like to suggest the word "cold" in the third line is redundant. Please reconsider it. Maybe it's from the syllabic meter. Even if you omit "cold" from the third line, then the first line counts 6, the next 7, the third 4, and the haiku will total 17 syllables.
a shadow slowly darkens
a cold cup of tea
(November, 2010)
Remi Pulwer (Toronto, ON, Canada)
The fantastic spelling of the English word "phantasmagoria" attracts me very much, and furthermore the word puts weight in the haiku.
phantasmagorias of leaves
in spirals of wind
(3rd prize: November, 2010)
john breacher (Lavington, Australia)
As he was taught by his father, the author released a small fish soon after he caught it. A lovable boy.
Then carefully
Puts it back.
(November, 2010)
Toshio Matsumoto (Osaka, Japan)
"Daibutsu-sama," beloved Buddha dear, it's no time to make up your face.
seems lipsticked
reflected in the pink lotus pond
(November, 2010)
Masaru Tsuguno (Osaka, Japan)
Interesting, although I don't know how to play casketball.
vampires
play casketball
(December, 2010)
Carlos Gesmundo (Minneapolis, MN, USA)
If it was All Fools' Day in the first line, this haiku would be dull.
the missing jigsaw pieces
I count alone
(December, 2010)
Ram Krishna Singh (Dhanbad, India)
The author is a keen observer of the old man.
under the umbrella
an old man with books
(December, 2010)
Marek Kozubek (Zywiec, Poland)
I am still at a loss over which way I have to take as a 69-year old haikuist.
more and more visible
the way to nowhere
(December, 2010)
Carolyn M. Hinderliter (Phoenix, AZ, USA)
A friend of mine who looks as vigorous as a 40-year old man always praises fried catfish as a dish. However I've never tried it, to tell the truth.
the familiar scent
of frying catfish
(3rd prize: December, 2010)
Natalia Kuznetsova (Moscow, Russia)
Only God knows when drastically effective new medicines will come out.
in the hospice window
leaves falling
(December, 2010)
Matthias Korn (Magdeburg, Germany)
Hey, you're drunk. You're the one who is staggering.
the moon
is staggering
(December, 2010)
Tomislav Maretic (Majdakova, Croatia)
A family gathers around the tree to celebrate Christmas, yet in other parts of the world people may be undergoing hardship. May God be with us and save the people in devastated northeastern Japan.
the Christmas tree, our family
slowly assembling
(December, 2010)